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Evaluna Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

HELP WITH THE SENTENCE

Although all the obligations arising from this contract shall be fulfilled, the bank shall not obliged to assure the first or any of the following disbursements of the credit if any of the following circumstances shall appear before or during the disbursement:



Please, would you check the sentence above. Thanks.



Eva
  

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I think the first part is not expressing what you would like; I would change it to read: Even if all the obligations arising from this contract shall have been fulfilled, the bank shall not be obliged... I would also change appear to occur.

— Mister Micawber

  • I think the first part is not expressing what you would like; I would change it to read: Even if all the obligations arising from this contract shall have been fulfilled, the bank shall not be obliged...
  • I would also change appear to occur.
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I think the first part is not expressing what you would like; I would change it to read:

Even if all the obligations arising from this contract shall have been fulfilled, the bank shall not be obliged...

I would also change appear to occur.

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