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We started piloting Fronter in the beginning of 2005. Training courses, pedagogical and technical support were organised. Certain mutual courses were offered to all the staff, in addition teachers could follow their individual plans and interests while bringing the tool into use. The Media Centre of Helsinki offered various courses and pedagogical support. These courses are contunuing non stop in order to enable the teachers to train themselves according their individual needs. At school level support is offered by more advanced colleagues. Different kinds of projects and integration themes between school subjects have been carried out. The classes and groups are working fluently with Fronter. Almost all the information is in Fronter and teachers communicate there. The pages concerning the pupils’ guidance are ready and in use, as well as the discussion forum. However, continuous development work is required in order to make progress.

Philologist · Accepted Answer

Overall quite a good text. You might want to consider using paragraphs to make the text more clear

AnonimousWe started piloting Fronter in the beginning of 2005. Training courses, pedagogical and technical support were organised. Certain mutual courses were offered to all Use "all staff members" or "the staff", but not both the staff and This sounds better teachers could follow their individual plans and interests while bringing the tool into use. The Media Centre of Helsinki offered various courses and pedagogical support. Doesn't this say the same as the second sentence? These courses are continuing Spelling correction + continuing already means without stopping, so I have erased "non stop" in order to enable the teachers to train themselves according to their individual needs. At the school level, support is offered by more advanced colleagues. Different kinds of projects and integration themes between school subjects have been carried out. The classes and groups are working fluently with Fronter. Almost all the information is in Fronter and teachers communicate there. The pages concerning the pupils’ guidance are ready and in use, as well as the discussion forum. However, continuous development work Redundant here is required in order to keep making Progress has already been made as far as I can infer. "to make progress" implies that no progress has been made yet. progress.

Anonimous · Answer

Thank you Philologist for the correction of the text.

Have a nice day,

Kati

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Anonymous · Answer

Hello can someone help me to correct this text please.

Beerhaus. Pub - Near to the Miraflores ovalo are placed somes of the most famous chains of fast food , department store and there are a group of bars in a not too wide street with adoquines , in the seccond block of this street the tourists can find placed the called house of beer or Beerhaus. This is like a german pub and you will be attended by women dressed with typicl german cloth. You will enjoy drinking some of the delicious peruvian beers .They use to do some concerts during the weeekends. You might dance too in the pista de baile.

Junius.

Make yourself your home at Junius.

In the pardo Boulevard you can find placed a unique and sophisticated restaurant to have the most delicious peruvian dishes in company of a good show of music and dances of peruvian folcklore, and to buy some of peruvian crafts .The elegant atmosphere of this restaurant combines with the good attendance. In the bar you can enjoy the most sophisticated peruvian drinks , such as Pisco Sour or one of your preference while in food you could taste some delicious dishes such as Rice with shrimp, cebiche (small chunk of sole marinated in lemon juice and hot peppers, a dish known worldwide)and a classic Peruvian dessert Arroz con leche ( a blend of rice and milk.). You will enjoy the comfort of being in the heart of Miraflores.

Segundo muelle. passion for the sea.

Where first to taste seafood .

In front of the boulevard next to the border of the cliff is placed one of the restaurant has reached a international recognition and had begun to set up restaurants in other countries like . With decoration of stuf from the sea and metal chairs and tables. You might try the special flavor of a classical peruvian dish El ceviche (prepared with slices of diferent kind of fishes and marinated with a lemon juice. ) or the Tacu Tacu (a combinatión of stews and rice, covered with chilly shellfish and served with fried yuccas.)and one of the most completed variety of seafood. An experience in Segundo muelle is something you will remember.

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