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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
HELP WITH THANK YOU LETTER
0 Could someone please help me with this run on sentence in a thank you letter for an interview I just had. I would like to keep the two experiences on the same sentence but it seems too long. THANKS! 02 br
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00 I felt a wonderful rapport with you and enjoyed hearing more about the position. I feel that my experience at both the March Of Dimes working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts as well as my work at Jay Advertising which gave me a feel for agency work and working with clients makes me an excellent candidate for this position. 0-
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00 I felt a wonderful rapport with you and enjoyed hearing more about the position. I feel that my experience at both the March Of Dimes working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts as well as my work at Jay Advertising which gave me a feel for agency work and working with clients makes me an excellent candidate for this position. 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 We know that you feel the way you're talking about because you're the one saying it. 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 My experience working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts for the March of Dimes, as well as my agency work and familiarity with client contact at Jay Advertising make me an excellent candidate for this position. " Your experience and your agency work and your client contact 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 .
- 02 br 02 br 00 We know that you feel the way you're talking about because you're the one saying it.
- 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 My experience working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts for the March of Dimes, as well as my agency work and familiarity with client contact at Jay Advertising make me an excellent candidate for this position.
- " Your experience and your agency work and your client contact 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 .
- I'm assuming that you did all the press releases and such for the March of Dimes.
- If not, then I have muddled the meaning of your sentence and I apologize.
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0 Is this for a writing position? 02 br
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00 We know that you feel the way you're talking about because you're the one saying it. So we can eliminate three words at the beginning of the sentence. 02 br
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01 font 00 My experience working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts for the March of Dimes, as well
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00 We know that you feel the way you're talking about because you're the one saying it. So we can eliminate three words at the beginning of the sentence. 02 br
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01 font 00 My experience working on press releases, media kits, speaking points, and media contacts for the March of Dimes, as well
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