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I would appreciate comments and suggestions on how to improve the essay below. I'm not an English teacher so I can't really explain the necessary changes.


In our schools we learn many subjects like math, science, literature, history, PE, and so on. In the statement, it is more important to study literature and history than math and science. In some ways, it's true. However, I disagree with the statement.
In my opinion, I think science and math are more significant than history and literature, due to the importance in life. For literature and science, we know the fundamentals already so when we study, we are just learning further topics, we are just digging it deeper and deeper and it is a bit useless, too unless you will become a professor. But in the case of science and math, it's more related to life, we use math everywhere and use science everywhere and totally, we are learning new topics or knowledges. For example, we use science and math when we measure the temperature of a person, thing and so on. However, we can't use history and literature everywhere, we can only express it in words or lectures. History and literature we can't account for temperature.
Additionally, I don't agree with the statement because science and math are more common and can easily be acknowledged by the world than history and literature. For history and literature, not all the places will use same language and have some history but all the countries used focus or science and math. For example, if you are good in literature and history, you should apply it in your country only because they are different for each places but if you are good in science and math, you have more chances to go abroad and get a better job than those who are good in history and literature only.
In conclusion, I disagree that history and literature are more important than math and science because it's the only way to train scientists and mathematicians and develop the world.