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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Help with sentence structure

Should there be any more commas or periods in this sentence? Is it okay the way it is?

Nir thought it's going to be a small side project, yet merely weeks after launch the service received worldwide recognition and was featured on all the major news outlets around the world.
  

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Nir thought it was going to be a small side-project, yet merely weeks after launch the service received worldwide recognition and was featured on all the major global news outlets.

  • Nir thought it was going to be a small side-project, yet merely weeks after launch the service received worldwide recognition and was featured on all the major global news outlets.
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Nir thought it was going to be a small side-project, yet merely weeks after launch the service received worldwide recognition and was featured on all the major global news outlets.

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