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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Help with sentence structure
Hi my name is Joyce I am 30 years old I live in new york with my parents and a son. can you help me please to find my way or to go outside to shop. I went to work yesterday and nothing was doing I am a home now
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Hi, The first thing you need to look at is your punctuation and use of capitals. You need a capital at the start of each sentence, and a period or other suitable punctuation at the end of each one. In this case, you begin with three short sentences that you have simply run together incorrectly into one long one.
- Hi, The first thing you need to look at is your punctuation and use of capitals.
- You need a capital at the start of each sentence, and a period or other suitable punctuation at the end of each one.
- In this case, you begin with three short sentences that you have simply run together incorrectly into one long one.
- Try again, and we will be happy to comment further.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
The first thing you need to look at is your punctuation and use of capitals.
You need a capital at the start of each sentence, and a period or other suitable punctuation at the end of each one.
In this case, you begin with three short sentences that you have simply run together incorrectly into one long one.
Try again, and we w
The first thing you need to look at is your punctuation and use of capitals.
You need a capital at the start of each sentence, and a period or other suitable punctuation at the end of each one.
In this case, you begin with three short sentences that you have simply run together incorrectly into one long one.
Try again, and we w
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