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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Help with sentence

Hi i'd studied economics and i want to apply for health economic and management master,
so can you help me to modified the second sentence, because i am not sure that is correct "One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology. In addition, working in the field of Economy and implying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industry it will fulfil my expectations."
  

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One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology. In addition, working in the field of Economics and applying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industries will allow me to fulfill my expectations. How's that?

  • One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology.
  • In addition, working in the field of Economics and applying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industries will allow me to fulfill my expectations.
  • How's that?
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One of my favorite subjects as a child was Biology. In addition, working in the field of Economics and applying that knowledge in the area of Pharmaceutical or Health care industries will allow me to fulfill my expectations.

How's that?

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