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I'm trying to translate a paragraph from someone, from Chinese to English.
Can someone please review if the English here makes sense itself?
eg 'peak fight' sounds a bit weird but I can't think of a better phrase. The online translation shows 'The battle for the Pinnacle' but not sure if it fits into this context.
Chinese NMA(Mixed Martial Arts) fighter Zhang Weili, the winner of UFC Women's Strawweight Champion 2019, successfully defended her UFC strawweight title in Las Vegas on March 8, defeating her challenger Joanne with more effective attacks. She also succeeded in fulfilling her pre-match promise to celebrate the victory with her motherland and her compatriots and to support the people who are fighting at the forefront of the COVID-19 in her own way.
In fact, the fight has been attracting the attention of global NMA fans since the day it was confirmed.
On one hand, it was because those two outstanding players were destined for a peak fight. On the other hand, the irrational behavior of Joanna and her fans before the match to attack the Chinese players with COVID-19 also injected more personal feelings into the battle. Under the misunderstanding of foreign media and contestants on the domestic epidemic, Zhang Weili overcame the difficulties and let the world see the power of Chinese women!
Zhang Weili, a responsible Chinese athlete, has demonstrated China's strength with her words and deeds! The future belongs to Zhang Weili. We will wait and see!
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Chinese M MA ( Mixed Martial Arts) fighter Zhang Weili, the winner of the UFC Women's Strawweight Champion 2019, successfully defended her UFC strawweight title in Las Vegas on March 8, defeating her challenger Joanne [ 1] Jones with more effective attacks. She also succeeded in fulfilling her pre-match promise to celebrate the victory with her motherland and her compatriots and to support the people who are fighting at the forefront of the COVID-19 battle in her own way. In fact, the fight has been attracting the attention of global M MA fans since the day it was confirmed.
- Chinese M MA ( Mixed Martial Arts) fighter Zhang Weili, the winner of the UFC Women's Strawweight Champion 2019, successfully defended her UFC strawweight title in Las Vegas on March 8, defeating her challenger Joanne [ 1] Jones with more effective attacks.
- She also succeeded in fulfilling her pre-match promise to celebrate the victory with her motherland and her compatriots and to support the people who are fighting at the forefront of the COVID-19 battle in her own way.
- In fact, the fight has been attracting the attention of global M MA fans since the day it was confirmed.
- On one hand, it was because those two outstanding players practitioners were destined for a peak title fight.
- On the other hand, the irrational behavior of Joanna Jones and her fans before the match to in attack ing the Chinese players team with COVID-19 slurs also injected more personal feelings into the battle.
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Chinese MMA (Mixed Martial Arts) fighter Zhang Weili, the winner of the UFC Women's Strawweight Champion 2019, successfully defended her UFC strawweight title in Las Vegas on March 8, defeating her challenger Joanne [ 1] Jones
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