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Placing the person's name within the text of a letter (if that's what this is) is not natural.

Mister MicawberPlacing the person's name within the text of a letter (if that's what this is) is not natural.

Thanks, teacher.

I placed the name within the context just to show that I am writing to him. I will make sure that I don't do that again.

So is everything else correct including the context of the message I intend to send?

AnonymousSo is everything else correct including the context of the message I intend to send?

Yes, though I cannot judge the content, of course.

Mister Micawber AnonymousSo is everything else correct including the context of the message I intend to send?Yes, though I cannot judge the content, of course.

Sorry, teacher. I did not get what you meant by ' you cannot judge the content'? Do you mean the rest of the message that I intend to send?

Anonymous Do you mean the rest of the message that I intend to send?

No, I mean that I cannot know that you really want to meet him for that purpose.

Mister Micawber Anonymous Do you mean the rest of the message that I intend to send?No, I mean that I cannot know that you really want to meet him for that purpose.

I see. But why can't you know that? Isn't the message clear that I would like to meet him to get his opinion on a fews questions I have?

Mister Micawber Anonymous Do you mean the rest of the message that I intend to send?No, I mean that I cannot know that you really want to meet him for that purpose.

I think I know what you mean. Would this knew sentence clarify that I want to meet for that purpose:

I would like to meet with you to get your opinion on a fews questions I have.

Never mind. Use your original message (minus the person's name).

Mister MicawberNever mind. Use your original message (minus the person's name).

OK. Thanks, teacher.

Is my second message grammatically correct as well?

AnonymousIs my second message grammatically correct as well?

Yes.