Help with Punctuation - Part 1

Hi can someone please approve my answer to the following punctuation exercise. My punctuation marks answers are highlighted in red font.

• In the following, insert capitals and punctuation marks:

A small narrow road cut at right angles into his path and as he approached this he heard the bustle and movement of a host the trample of feet the rolling and creaking of wheels and the long unwearied drone of voices in a few minutes he came abreast of this small road and saw an ass and cart piled with pots and pans and walking beside this there were two men and a woman the men and the woman were talking loudly even fiercely and the ass was drawing his cart along the road without requiring assistance.

A small narrow road cut at right angles into his path and, as he approached this, he heard the bustle and movement of a host, the trample of feet, the rolling and creaking of wheels and the long unwearied drone of voices. In a few minutes he came abreast of this small road and saw an ass and cart piled with pots and pans, and walking beside this, there were two men and a woman. The men and the woman were talking loudly, even fiercely, and the ass was drawing his cart along the road without requiring assistance.