Help with phrases please
Can someone help me make this paragraph better? I underlined the words or phrases that I need help revising to add more jazz. My content skills are not that great. Thanks!
After the heavy rain and hurdling up giant boulders, I stumbled upon the most memorable view of my trip. My timing reaching the top couldn’t have been any more perfect as the setting sun glowed in the midst of the storm
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After the heavy rain and hurdling up giant boulders, I stumbled upon the most memorable view of my trip. My timing reaching the top couldn’t have been any more perfect as the setting sun glowed in the midst of the storm I think the phrases are very good. You have two mistakes: #1 It is not hurdling.
- After the heavy rain and hurdling up giant boulders, I stumbled upon the most memorable view of my trip.
- My timing reaching the top couldn’t have been any more perfect as the setting sun glowed in the midst of the storm I think the phrases are very good.
- You have two mistakes: #1 It is not hurdling.
- It is HURTLING.
- #2 my timing IN reaching the top
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After the heavy rain and hurdling up giant boulders, I stumbled upon the most memorable view of my trip. My timing reaching the top couldn’t have been any more perfect as the setting sun glowed in the midst of the storm
I think the phrases are very good. You have two mistakes:#1 It is not h
0After slogging through the heavy rain and scrambling up giant boulders, I stumbled upon the most memorable view of my trip. My timing in reaching the summit couldn’t have been any more perfect as the setting sun cast fiery orange-red halos on the ominous inky thunderheads.
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