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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Help with paragraph
Hello,
I am not a native english speaker and i am trying to write a very little informative paragraph about a wallet.
I am hoping that someone who is a native speaker can take a look at it and correct any mistakes i might have made,...
- - This minimalist front pocket wallet is a solid durable option to keep your bulk under control. No more backpain or hasle but an easy to store cash and card holder that will fit into any pocket you desire. The flat minimal concept is designed ito make life easier and is made out of top cow durable leather. --
Hope someone can help me out....
Thanks!
I am not a native english speaker and i am trying to write a very little informative paragraph about a wallet.
I am hoping that someone who is a native speaker can take a look at it and correct any mistakes i might have made,...
- - This minimalist front pocket wallet is a solid durable option to keep your bulk under control. No more backpain or hasle but an easy to store cash and card holder that will fit into any pocket you desire. The flat minimal concept is designed ito make life easier and is made out of top cow durable leather. --
Hope someone can help me out....
Thanks!
Top answer
) durable option to keep your bulk (It controls your weight? ) under control. ) or hasle but an easy to store cash and card holder that will fit into any pocket you desire.
- ) durable option to keep your bulk (It controls your weight?
- ) under control.
- ) or hasle but an easy to store cash and card holder that will fit into any pocket you desire.
- (You said earlier that it was a front pocket wallet.
- ) and is made out of top quality cow hide durable leather .
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This minimalist front pocket wallet is a solid (It is not flexible?) durable option to keep your bulk (It controls your weight? Or does it make your belly look smaller?) under control.
No more back pain (Does folding money or credit cards, especially a pocket-sized roll, weigh enough to cause back pain?) or hasle b
No more back pain (Does folding money or credit cards, especially a pocket-sized roll, weigh enough to cause back pain?) or hasle b
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AnonymousI am not a native english speaker and iEnglish, should always be written a capital letter E. When referring to yourself, always write a capital letter I.
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Thank you for the thorough analysis.!
Solid is wrong yes., thanks for pointing that out.
Bulk under control --> The wallet is very thin so compared to a normal sized wallet you won't be siiting on a big bulky wallet should you put it in your backpocket. ( Please tell me how to describe this better in the paragraph if you can? )
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Backpain --> This is ment to relate
Solid is wrong yes., thanks for pointing that out.
Bulk under control --> The wallet is very thin so compared to a normal sized wallet you won't be siiting on a big bulky wallet should you put it in your backpocket. ( Please tell me how to describe this better in the paragraph if you can? )
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Backpain --> This is ment to relate
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AnonymousBackpain --> This is meant to relate to having a big bulk in your back pocket.You mean a bulky wallet.
Bulk by itself means weight, usually excess weight.
A thick wallet in a man's back pocket might cause some discomfort in the gluteus maximus, but not in the back. I don't think that is a very good selling point.
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