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AH020387 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Help with paragraph

Can you please tell me if all the punctuations are in the right places in the following paragraph:

I enjoy being the owner of my own Will; in other words I enjoy doing what I want, to be spontaneous yet not capricious. I live my life without any attachment to the outcome of any situation. What do I mean you ask? Let me give you an example, if I find good I'm happy, and, if I find that which is seemingly "evil", I'm still happy:) Through this attitude the Moon is always kept over my head, and True Bliss, or in New Age terminology "synchronicity", is attained thus!;)
  

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Can you please tell me if all the punctuations are in the right places in the following paragraph: I enjoy being the owner of my own Will; in other words I enjoy doing what I want, to be spontaneous yet not capricious. I live my life without any attachment to the outcome of any situation. What do I mean you ask?

  • Can you please tell me if all the punctuations are in the right places in the following paragraph: I enjoy being the owner of my own Will; in other words I enjoy doing what I want, to be spontaneous yet not capricious.
  • I live my life without any attachment to the outcome of any situation.
  • What do I mean you ask?
  • ;) Here's what I would do.
  • I enjoy being the owner of my own will.
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Can you please tell me if all the punctuations are in the right places in the following paragraph:

I enjoy being the owner of my own Will; in other words I enjoy doing what I want, to be spontaneous yet not capricious. I live my life without any attachment to the outcome of any situation. What do I mean you ask? Let me give you an example, if I find good I'm happy, and, if I find that whi
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Thanks Clive

I changed the paragraph a bit, could you please tell me if I need to place a comma after the highlighted word:

And lastly, I enjoy being the owner of my own Will. In other words, I enjoy doing what I want; to be spontaneous yet not capricious. I live my life without any attachment to the outcome of any situation. Meaning if I find
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Hi,

could you please tell me if I need to place a comma after the highlighted word:

I wouldn't. Using a 'meaning . . . ' phrase like this is casual English, so there is no need to be fussy about commas.

Clive

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