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Hello, is my paragraph below correctly puncutated?
Karen's face contorted in pain. As she watched her boss's daughter walked down the aisle, her
best friend, Georgia Friedman, deathlike grip caused her to grimace.
"The nerve of some people." Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair
bobbed as she through a dagger look at the bride. "She has the gall to wear white."
Embarrased Karen pried her hand free and rubbed the life back in it.
Karen's face contorted in pain. As she watched her boss's daughter walked down the aisle, her
best friend, Georgia Friedman, deathlike grip caused her to grimace.
"The nerve of some people." Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair
bobbed as she through a dagger look at the bride. "She has the gall to wear white."
Embarrased Karen pried her hand free and rubbed the life back in it.
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Karen's face contorted in pain. As she watched her boss's daughter walk down the aisle, her best friend Georgia Friedman's deathlike grip caused her to grimace. " Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair bobbing as she looked daggers at the bride.
- Karen's face contorted in pain.
- As she watched her boss's daughter walk down the aisle, her best friend Georgia Friedman's deathlike grip caused her to grimace.
- " Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair bobbing as she looked daggers at the bride.
- "She has the gall to wear white !
- " Embarrased , Karen pried her hand free and rubbed the life back into it.
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Karen's face contorted in pain. As she watched her boss's daughter walk down the aisle, her best friend Georgia Friedman's deathlike grip caused her to grimace.
"The nerve of some people!"
Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair bobbing as she looked daggers at the bride.
"She has the gall to wear white
Karen's face contorted in pain. As she watched her boss's daughter walk down the aisle, her best friend Georgia Friedman's deathlike grip caused her to grimace.
"The nerve of some people!"
Georgia leaned over Jessie's shoulders, her blonde strawberry hair bobbing as she looked daggers at the bride.
"She has the gall to wear white
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