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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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help with my sentence please

I hope to show you my confidence, energy, and well-spoken nature will be the type of person your patients can rely on.
  

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Anonymous I hope to show you that my confidence, energy, and well-spoken nature will be make me the type of person your patients can rely on. Without that , the reader's first impression is that you are hoping show the confidence, etc. themselves.

— Philip

  • Anonymous I hope to show you that my confidence, energy, and well-spoken nature will be make me the type of person your patients can rely on.
  • Without that , the reader's first impression is that you are hoping show the confidence, etc.
  • themselves.
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AnonymousI hope to show you that my confidence, energy, and well-spoken nature will be make me the type of person your patients can rely on.

Without that, the reader's first impression is that you are hoping show the confidence, etc. themselves.
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Philip
AnonymousI hope to show you that my confidence, energy, and well-spoken nature will be make me the type of person your patients can rely on.

Without that, the reader's first impression is that you are hoping show the confidence
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