HELP WITH MY MOTIVATION LETTER

Dear Sir/Madam
I am applying for your Bachelors program of Physiotherapy starting in September 2014.
I recently graduated from Midlands Christian College here in X with my GCE A level and IGSCE O Level certificates. I studied Maths, Chemistry and Biology in my last two years of high school. My ambition is to graduate as a fully fledged Physiotherapist and to go on to specialize in neurological physical therapy.
My first exposure to Physical Therapy was three years ago after I injured my knee during a volleyball match. The pain was so unbearable i thought it would never stop. Amazingly after a week of deep tissue massage, cold compresses and stretching and strengthening exercises to reduce the pain and swelling my knee was much better. I was back to playing volleyball again. It was from this experience that I cultivated a keen interest in the study and practice of Physiotherapy.
In January 2012 I got the chance to have a 2 week long work experience at Claybank Clinic here in my home town X. During this time I realized that physical therapy was much more than just dealing with sports-related injuries, people with asthma, back pains, stroke victims and Parkinson’s disease came in to the clinic for therapy. With each of the patients I noticed that the physiotherapist set goals and objectives that were measurable and achievable within the scope of the condition of the patient. This showed me that this field of Physical therapy required gentle care and assertive methods to help the patient plus great patients as you work with patients of all ages. The work experience enabled me to attain a concise insight into the work ethics and opportunities in the profession.
I have read through the testimonials and student reviews of the university and I am more than certain that Saxion University is the place for me. The outstanding facilities and educational system at the university will equip me fully with knowledge and techniques to take back home to X. No education is complete without experience, getting the opportunity to study abroad gives me a chance that I have never gotten before to learn and interact with people from all around the world, learning new cultures and languages.
Accompanying my academics is my developed skills in leadership. I was the Vice Head girl and Vice President of the Toastmasters society at my previous high school. I am currently part of the City’s Junior Council. In the Council I am part of the team that is in charge of fundraising for the different causes e.g. school fees for less privileged children, buying supplies for the orphanages and more. It is fun and innovative way for the youth to give back to the community.
I am confident that I will bring a high level of commitment, energy and leadership to the program and to the school, enriching others with my Xculture and zeal for life.
Thank you for considering my application, I look forward to your acceptance.
Yours Sincerely