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Franceschella Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help with my grammar

Hello, could you correct it, please?I always work towards establishing constructive relationships with my colleagues, a positive environment is essential in achieving success as a team. I think, one of the best ways to build relationships is to let others know who I am, little by little without artificial forcing. I like to share my knowledge and be from the very beginning efficient and supportive, as well as a pleasant and a reliable team player, showing enthusiasm and a friendly attitude.
  

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Hello, franceschella—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined two problem areas. If you will post a revised version, we'll check it for you again.

  • Hello, franceschella—and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined two problem areas.
  • If you will post a revised version, we'll check it for you again.
  • I always work towards establishing constructive relationships with my colleagu es, a pos itive environment is essential in achieving success as a team.
  • I th ink, o ne of the best ways to build relationships is to let others know who I am, little by little without artificial forcing.
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Hello, franceschella—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined two problem areas. If you will post a revised version, we'll check it for you again.

I always work towards establishing constructive relationships with my colleagues, a positive environment is essential in achieving success as a team. I think, one of the best ways to build relationships is to let others

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