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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Help with my formal letter
Hello. I need someone to tell me if my letter is correct or not. I mean the english phrases and vocabulary. Thanks
Dear Mrs
While I was in the University of Panthéon-Assas to learn more about the functioning of the university, I have learnt of your course “Civilization and Common law”. I would like to be an applicant for it.
I am a student in first year of law and I would like to complete this formation by doing a specialization in the common law. It will later permit me to turn towards a European or international juridical career. Indeed I would like to work as a judge in the European Court of Justice.
To succeed in that way, I chose to do law at university until I pass the second year of master. Nevertheless the knowledge of one or two other systems of European jurisdiction is indispensable. I need to acquire the important English legal terms and concepts that will be required for my studies and my future career in law. If I am a registered student in the it’s also because I am interested in the ERASMUS program in the third year of license. This program could be a good experience before working in an English speaking country. And as I read it in your brochure, the course “Civilization and Common law” is a good preparation for this student mobility program.
I am confident that my current level in English is suitable to follow this course. As a matter of fact I passed the first certificate of English from the University of Cambridge (FCE) and my mark in English at the baccalaureate was 17. Moreover, I often do advanced training courses of more than three weeks per year in English speaking countries such as Canada, United Kingdom and .
I would be grateful for the opportunity to be chosen for this course and I hope I have demonstrated my motivation about my professional project.
Yours sincerely
Dear Mrs
While I was in the University of Panthéon-Assas to learn more about the functioning of the university, I have learnt of your course “Civilization and Common law”. I would like to be an applicant for it.
I am a student in first year of law and I would like to complete this formation by doing a specialization in the common law. It will later permit me to turn towards a European or international juridical career. Indeed I would like to work as a judge in the European Court of Justice.
To succeed in that way, I chose to do law at university until I pass the second year of master. Nevertheless the knowledge of one or two other systems of European jurisdiction is indispensable. I need to acquire the important English legal terms and concepts that will be required for my studies and my future career in law. If I am a registered student in the it’s also because I am interested in the ERASMUS program in the third year of license. This program could be a good experience before working in an English speaking country. And as I read it in your brochure, the course “Civilization and Common law” is a good preparation for this student mobility program.
I am confident that my current level in English is suitable to follow this course. As a matter of fact I passed the first certificate of English from the University of Cambridge (FCE) and my mark in English at the baccalaureate was 17. Moreover, I often do advanced training courses of more than three weeks per year in English speaking countries such as Canada, United Kingdom and .
I would be grateful for the opportunity to be chosen for this course and I hope I have demonstrated my motivation about my professional project.
Yours sincerely
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Address in formal letter is as followes To The Head/Professor,Principal, Name of the institute, place. you need not tell stories. stick to the point.
- Address in formal letter is as followes To The Head/Professor,Principal, Name of the institute, place.
- you need not tell stories.
- stick to the point.
- keep your tenses correct.
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Address in formal letter is as followes
To
The Head/Professor,Principal,
Name of the institute,
place.
Subject;-------------
Sir,
In the body of the letter you have to be very precise.you need not tell stories. stick to the point. keep your tenses correct.
To
The Head/Professor,Principal,
Name of the institute,
place.
Subject;-------------
Sir,
In the body of the letter you have to be very precise.you need not tell stories. stick to the point. keep your tenses correct.
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