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Crew Cut Posted 12 years ago
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people think , who earns much money is successful . I partly agree with this statement. Money indicates people`s condition and reflect their life. However , others believe , that people who have not got a lot of money can be successful too. Having much money has a lot of advantages, but it has some disadvantages too.
The rich who have high salary are successful. For the several reasons , they can effort what they want and own : big houses , cars and many influential friends . In the present day , Money may solve the number of problems in life and these are one of the particular advantages. In addition, it creates good conditions to live and it has positive effect in lifestyle of each person .
However , some people believe , that money creates not only a beautiful life but this also makes and some drawbacks such as : dissatisfactions with personal life , fake relationships with colleagues and leisure time. Because , those who make money are working hard and their success in this. They are time consuming in work due to he or she can not effort environment in free time. In addition , people have fake relationship and be friends for money. I think , that this is true in life.
In conclusion, Having a good education and having a happy family are the best way to successful. Because , this is the real things and it does not depends on a lot of money or any conditions. I think , that successful is having a real attention with people and happy family .
  

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in my opinion, people who earn a lot of money have more chance to be happy and successful. Cause they have an oppotunity to support on it in any situation. But its the sharpest edge of this question.

  • in my opinion, people who earn a lot of money have more chance to be happy and successful.
  • Cause they have an oppotunity to support on it in any situation.
  • But its the sharpest edge of this question.
  • If it would be a man - with his money he could do any greatest date that she ever had/ if it would be a women - she could looks like a princes cause she can buy what ever she want/ and that is why it would be rather easy to find a man.
  • But honestly saying many people, when they catch opportunity to earn big money, when they take it, they don t realy know what they need to do with this big sum.
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in my opinion, people who earn a lot of money have more chance to be happy and successful. Cause they have an oppotunity to support on it in any situation. But its the sharpest edge of this question. If it would be a man - with his money he could do any greatest date that she ever had/ if it would be a women - she could looks like a princes cause she can buy what ever she want/ and that is why it

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