0
Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Help with my English assignment please!
Hello everybody, there is a assignment i have problems with. The language of the question is too difficult for me to understand. Can somebody help me please? Thanks.
Revise the following sentences, replacing many of the Latnisims, unnecessary noun phrases, and jargon with plain language:
a) It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospective clients prior to the finalization of their respective sales forecasts.
b) In accordance with managerial policy, any intensification of effort on the part of employees leading to a mximization of production will be met with commensurate compensation.
c) It is the decision of supervisory personnel that, with respect to employees, attendance charts will be maintained on a monthly basis.
d) It should be noted that greater utilization of the company manual, which provides an outline of factory hazards, will have as a consequence an improvement in our safety record.
Revise the following sentences, replacing many of the Latnisims, unnecessary noun phrases, and jargon with plain language:
a) It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospective clients prior to the finalization of their respective sales forecasts.
b) In accordance with managerial policy, any intensification of effort on the part of employees leading to a mximization of production will be met with commensurate compensation.
c) It is the decision of supervisory personnel that, with respect to employees, attendance charts will be maintained on a monthly basis.
d) It should be noted that greater utilization of the company manual, which provides an outline of factory hazards, will have as a consequence an improvement in our safety record.
Top answer
Hi, Rewrite these sentences as simply as you can, using simple words. Clive
- Hi, Rewrite these sentences as simply as you can, using simple words.
- Clive
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
3 Answers
0
Hi,
Rewrite these sentences as simply as you can, using simple words.
Clive
Rewrite these sentences as simply as you can, using simple words.
Clive
00
I have underlined the Latinisms, unnecessary noun phrases, and jargon. I have also crossed out unnecessary phrasers. Please try to replace the underlined with plain language. Many are noun phrases which should be changed to simpler and more direct verbs:
a) It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospect
a) It is incumbent upon our sales representatives to make overtures of a positive nature to prospect
00
Hi did you solve the problem?
I am doing it now for my english class, but it is my second language. i found it is so hard to me. I am stuck on it. Could you please help me with it? Thank you.
0
Related Questions