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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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001) Is the sentence below concise? especially the use of "together with", can I use "and" instead and still maintain clarity?02br
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00My interest in research together with my communication and analytical skills qualify me for the position.02br
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002) Does the sentence below tells you clearly that the adjective "sales" applies to managers and executives as well?02br
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00I conducted training for sales directors, managers and executives.02br
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003) Similarly, does the sentence below tells you clearly that "skills" is applied to "running" and "jumping" as well?02br
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00My running, jumping and swimming skills are good.02br
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004) Also, does the sentence below tell you clearly that all the activities were carried out in IT projects?02br
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00Managed relationships with clients and business partners, resolved differences, and aligned goals in IT projects0-
  

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01) Is the sentence below concise? especially the use of "together with", can I use "and" instead and still maintain clarity? -- 01b 01i 00I like 'together with' better; it is clearer and more meaningful.

— Mister Micawber

  • 01) Is the sentence below concise?
  • especially the use of "together with", can I use "and" instead and still maintain clarity?
  • -- 01b 01i 00I like 'together with' better; it is clearer and more meaningful.
  • 02i 02b 02br 02br 002) Does the sentence below tells you clearly that the adjective "sales" applies to managers and executives as well?
  • -- 01b 01i 00No, not clearly.
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01) Is the sentence below concise? especially the use of "together with", can I use "and" instead and still maintain clarity? -- 01b01i00I like 'together with' better; it is clearer and more meaningful. 'And' is a little awkward.02i02b02br
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002) Does the sentence below tells you clearly that the adjective "sales" applies to managers and
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0Thanks much for your help.02br
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00kinda suspected that they aren't perfectly clear. however, in the context of resume, can we make do with it since brevity is more important and we can safely assume the reader can understand it?0-
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0hello, 02br
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00i had kinda guessed that its not perfectly clear. however, since brevity is more important in resume writing, can we assume that the reader will understand, given the context.0-
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0Hello, Cogar. Clarity should not be sacrificed to brevity-- especially in a resume.0-
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