Help with motivation letter

Hello! I am writing a motivation letter for my University to study abroad. I would be grateful, if you would point out some mistakes. Thank you in advance!

Here is the letter:

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Dasaf Kokol and I am writing to apply for the study abroad program that my university provides, specifically for the Nanyang Technical University in Singapore as an undergraduate student in electrical engineering. I believe that a semester spent in the prestigious and renowned NTU would tremendously contribute to my future academic and professional career as well as letting me experience student life in one of the most modern and culturally vibrant cities in the world, Singapore.

I am currently studying Cybernetics and Robotics at Faculty of electrical engineering as a second year student. My study period so far has sparked a great technological interest in me, especially in robotics, which was rather short and casual but interesting and enriching nonetheless. My faculty already puts great emphasis on individual students and gives them many opportunities for developing their technical skills. The exchange program would help me understand, how other universities approach their students, especially NTU as one of the best universities in my field of study. Moreover the competitive environment, that these prestigious facilities are known for, would sharpen my skills even further. I personally do not fear the difficulty of NTU, because as a student of CTU I know how to divide my time between studying and leisure activities. Furthermore, according to former exchange students from CTU, the best time to go on a semester in NTU is as an undergraduate student, because of the more flexible and better suited courses options. Not to mention the guaranteed university dormitories for every undergraduate student.

As much as the University, I am also interested in the location as well. For a very long time I have been fascinated in Asian culture, so much so, that I had been saving money over the course of last three years, just to visit Asia last summer. Therefore I would be glad to add Singapore to my destination list. As one of the most modern and “green” cities, I would love to know how the technology and society ties together and functions as a whole. I believe it would benefit my academic career as well, considering my field of study. Meeting new people and exchanging contacts is also a vital part of student experience, especially in NTU as its exchange student group is very strong and welcoming. I consider myself a very social and outgoing person, who likes to communicate in English, which is why I would fit perfectly into the foreign student community.

In conclusion, I believe that that the opportunity to study in NTU would be an unforgettable experience for me in both academic and social meaning. As a student of CTU I would be honored to be part in the study abroad program and would represent my university with all my dedication and power.

Thank you very much for considering my application.

Yours faithfully,

Dasaf Kokol