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NhanDinh Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

help with letter

Hello:

I'm trying to write this as a cover letter. I would love it to be a cover letter. I don't know how to fix it for it to be more readable and understandable.

Thank you for your help.

I am writing in regards to my interest in your advertised Production Test Specialist position, job number GA7470201. Previously, I worked at DataPath Inc. as an Electrical/Mechanical Assembler Tech. As an assembler, I wired and installed electrical panel, and terminated cables for proper connection to use in a compact trailer-based earth terminal that delivers secure, robust communications at the battalion level for communications on the quick halt (COTQH). I am also familiar with 12Volt battery and battery relay. Furthermore, I used function generator, oscilloscope analyzer, and digital multi-meter regularly in the technology lab at our University. During my academic years, I have learned and experienced multi-tasks and knowledge of engineering concepts, practices, and procedures. With my experience and knowledge, I feel that I am highly qualified for the position.



I’ll be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor degree in Electrical Engineering Technology. I am proficient in Assembly Language, VHDL, MatLab, MathCad, and LabView. I also have strong understanding in circuit analysis. I am an expert in multi-tasking, performing various electrical and mechanical duties.
  

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I cannot vouch for the appropriacy of your technical terms, but I can help you a bit with the general grammar and presentation: Dear ________ : I am writing in response to your advertised Production Test Specialist position, Job number GA7470201. I will be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor's degree in Electrical Engineering Technology [in month, year]. During my academic years, I have studied and experienced multi-tasks and acquired a knowledge of engineering concepts, practices and procedures.

  • I cannot vouch for the appropriacy of your technical terms, but I can help you a bit with the general grammar and presentation: Dear ________ : I am writing in response to your advertised Production Test Specialist position, Job number GA7470201.
  • I will be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor's degree in Electrical Engineering Technology [in month, year].
  • During my academic years, I have studied and experienced multi-tasks and acquired a knowledge of engineering concepts, practices and procedures.
  • I am proficient in Assembly Language, VHDL, MatLab, MathCad, and LabView.
  • I also have a strong understanding of circuit analysis, and I operated function generators, oscilloscope analyzers, and digital multi-meters regularly in our university technology laboratory.
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I cannot vouch for the appropriacy of your technical terms, but I can help you a bit with the general grammar and presentation:

Dear ________ :

I am writing in response to your advertised Production Test Specialist position, Job number GA7470201.
I will be graduating from Southern Polytechnic State University with a bachelor's degree in Electrical Engineering Technol

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