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I was just wondering if someone could check this
1. First let me tell you my purpose plain;
2.Housekeeping is a job you would hate to claim
3.They told us it was an easy feat,
4.And even told us the pay couldn't be beat
5.But when your supervisor starts stealing all your tips,
6.You don't know why but she's such a bitch
7. The job is not a Midsummers night,
8.Cause you walk in the rooms full of freight
9."The job is easy" my sister said,
10. I wouldn't agree while making a bed
11. "Housekeeping" you say on repeat,
12. And you open the door with a loud heartbeat
13. Because of the mess they made
14. You kinda get a feeling like you just got played
15. And then in the mornings when you stock your cart
16. You get the feeling of a broken heart
17.The foreign girls are crazy for sheets
18. You just kinda stare at them like they're creeps
19. Don't even get me started on the food
20. If asked for a rate they would just get booed
21. The cart is the biggest pain in the butt
22. Pushing it around makes you feel like a female mutt
23. And when Carmen comes walking down the hall
24. You can smell her breath and want to fall
25. Your weekend is ruined when you work nine to five
26. A new job is the only thing that I strive
27. Cleaning the bathroom that is full of hair,
28. Or even cleaning the toilets is not fair
29. One hour to one room is the ratio,
30. And I look at the supervisor and think hell no
31. There's never any laundry to do your job
32. And the sheets on your cart then get robbed
33. You have to deal with guests all day
34. I just want to ask for a higher pay
35. I want to look at my co workers with disgust
36. Because this job is such a bust
37. My manager calls my name down the hall
38. A name I wish she just wouldn't call
39. When I first started this job seemed great
40. Maybe I've put too much to handle on my plate
41. This job isn't what it was cracked out to be
42. This maybe just isn't the right job for me
43. If I knew how it was I wouldn't be here
44. Countdown to one and I'll gladly disappear
45. It's just like Big Sean said about you
46. He's got a million trillion things he'd rather *** do
47. This job is one Id never repeat
48. It's a job where I would rather be a deadbeat
49. I mean who wants a job like that
50. Where they walk all over you like you're a Matt
51. That's the thing about all of those fools
52. The jobs they request are plain out cruel
53. Now I'm not like this out on the streets
54. I'm actually a person you might like to meet
55. But when you put up with so much stuff
56. Its hard to be able to complain enough
57. They use their words to trick teenage girls
58. They said "oh give this job a little whirl"
59. They said it would be easy and I believed them
60. But five months of agonizing work later, it's this job I condemn
  

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1. You don't know why but she's such a ***** 7. "The job is easy" my sister said, 10.

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  • You don't know why but she's such a ***** 7.
  • "The job is easy" my sister said, 10.
  • I wouldn't agree while making a bed 11.
  • "Housekeeping" you say, on knock, knock and repeat , 12.
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1. First let me tell you my purpose plain;
2.Housekeeping's a job you would hate to claim
3.They told us it was an easy feat,
4.And that the pay couldn't be beat
5.But when your boss starts stealing all your tips,
6.You don't know why but she's such a *****
7. The job is It's not a dream of a midsummer's night ,

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