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BODY IMAGE

Both authors agree that "body images" presented in the media promote physical and psychological

diseases among women. The world is constantly changing and evolving. It is not possible to stop this

pressure from happening in today's society. As a result we are faced with what many people feel is the

inevitable evolution of body image. In today's society, beauty in a woman consider plastic surgery

includes breast augmentation or lift, slender includes weight loss, body painting included piercing

and tattoos.