HELP WITH GRAMMAR??!!
When Chloe saw the first ghost at school, whose face was burnt, eyes popped out from their sockets, cheeks sagged, and lips drooped, she freaked out. Chloe was taken to the hospital and then put into Lyle House. A ‘special home’ home for troubled teens.
Does that paragraph have the correct grammar and everything? If not how should I fix it?
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The first sentence is garbled. The last sentence is incomplete. To fix it, I need an answer to these questions: Did she see more than one ghost?
- The first sentence is garbled.
- The last sentence is incomplete.
- To fix it, I need an answer to these questions: Did she see more than one ghost?
- Did she see the same ghost more than once?
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The first sentence is garbled. The last sentence is incomplete.
To fix it, I need an answer to these questions:
Did she see more than one ghost?
Did she see the same ghost more than once?
0When Chloe saw the first (It was not the first of many, and it was not the first time of many.) ghost at school, whose face was burnt, eyes popped out from their sockets, cheeks sagged, and lips drooped, she freaked out at the sight. Its face was burnt, its eyes popped out from their sockets, its cheeks sagged, and its lips droo
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