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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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I need your help. For the following text, can you say if the sentences are fine, both grammatically and syntactically? and suggest some proposals ….?
"Return on investment (ROI) expected to be highly profitable for two reasons:
The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies. In the future, it is expected to be even greater demand for such products. (Adelina Comas and associates, 2010)
Current generations are technologically educated and quite familiar to use electronic systems. Therefore, when these people arrive in the third age, it is quite easy to understand the usefulness of such systems and to use themes."
I need your help. For the following text, can you say if the sentences are fine, both grammatically and syntactically? and suggest some proposals ….?
"Return on investment (ROI) expected to be highly profitable for two reasons:
The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies. In the future, it is expected to be even greater demand for such products. (Adelina Comas and associates, 2010)
Current generations are technologically educated and quite familiar to use electronic systems. Therefore, when these people arrive in the third age, it is quite easy to understand the usefulness of such systems and to use themes."
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Anonymous "Return on investment (ROI) expected to be highly profitable for two reasons: The return on investment (ROI) is expected to be excellent for two reasons: Anonymous The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies. In the future, it is expected to be even greater demand for such products. (Adelina Comas and associates, 2010) The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies.
- Anonymous "Return on investment (ROI) expected to be highly profitable for two reasons: The return on investment (ROI) is expected to be excellent for two reasons: Anonymous The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies.
- In the future, it is expected to be even greater demand for such products.
- (Adelina Comas and associates, 2010) The growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies.
- In the future, there is expected to be even greater demand for such products.
- (Adelina Comas and associates, 2010) Anonymous Current generations are technologically educated and quite familiar to use electronic systems.
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Anonymous"Return on investment (ROI) expected to be highly profitable for two reasons:The return on investment (ROI) is expected to be excellent for two reasons:
AnonymousThe growing spread of Alzheimer's disease and dementia has already created the need for supporting technologies. In the future, it is expected to be even great
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