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Zee7 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Help with explaining a past story
I was so excited to see this fort that i woke up 5am in the morning. Packed my cam bag and i was all set to go. After reaching there i found out that it was a bit too early. The fort opened at 9:00.
Please correct it if there's any problem in it one big confusion that i have is, should i use "The fort would open at 9:00 in the morning" or its alright the way i wrote.
Please correct it if there's any problem in it one big confusion that i have is, should i use "The fort would open at 9:00 in the morning" or its alright the way i wrote.
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zee7 Please correct it if there's any problem in it The big mistake is that the word "i" is not a valid word. To be valid, it must be a capital letter. Also, in your second sentence, the verb "packed" needs a subject.
- zee7 Please correct it if there's any problem in it The big mistake is that the word "i" is not a valid word.
- To be valid, it must be a capital letter.
- Also, in your second sentence, the verb "packed" needs a subject.
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zee7Please correct it if there's any problem in itThe big mistake is that the word "i" is not a valid word. To be valid, it must be a capital letter.
Also, in your second sentence, the verb "packed" needs a subject.
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Thanks for pointing out the mistake. Is there any problem with the sentences? I'm doubtful about the last line "The fort would open at 9:00" or it should be "The fort opened at 9:00"
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zee7fort would open at 9:00" or it should be "The fort opened at 9:00"Both are possible. In the first you are effectively reporting the thought "The fort will open ..." and in the second "The fort opens ...". The first is a (true) future-time situation and the second a (true) general-time situation.
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