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Fizzi Posted 17 years ago
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Hi all,
Can somebody please comments the English?
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Fizzi
1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system in controlling X, our results indicated lower quality of X in Sweden compared with Italy. We hypothesis the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference with the reporting system of M.
2- In Italy, K publicly disclose summary of all M. Contrary to that, the P does not publicly disclose the M to the public in Sweden. The ethics committee only informed the findings and names of companies involved to the P. In addition to that, our request from the organisation failed to provide any information.
Can somebody please comments the English?
Regards,
Fizzi
1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system in controlling X, our results indicated lower quality of X in Sweden compared with Italy. We hypothesis the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference with the reporting system of M.
2- In Italy, K publicly disclose summary of all M. Contrary to that, the P does not publicly disclose the M to the public in Sweden. The ethics committee only informed the findings and names of companies involved to the P. In addition to that, our request from the organisation failed to provide any information.
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Try: 1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system of controlling X, our results have indicated a lower quality of X in Sweden as compared to that in Italy. We hypothesize that the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference in the reporting system of M. 2- In Italy, K publicly disclose a summary of all M.
- Try: 1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system of controlling X, our results have indicated a lower quality of X in Sweden as compared to that in Italy.
- We hypothesize that the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference in the reporting system of M.
- 2- In Italy, K publicly disclose a summary of all M.
- In contrast, P did not publicly disclose M to the public in Sweden.
- The ethics committee only informed the findings and names of companies involved to the P.
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Try:
1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system of controlling X, our results have indicated a lower quality of X in Sweden as compared to that in Italy. We hypothesize that the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference in the reporting system of M.
2- In Italy, K publicly disclose a summary of all M. In contrast, P did not publicly disclose M
1- While it appears that Sweden and Italy have the same system of controlling X, our results have indicated a lower quality of X in Sweden as compared to that in Italy. We hypothesize that the low quality of X in Sweden may be due to the difference in the reporting system of M.
2- In Italy, K publicly disclose a summary of all M. In contrast, P did not publicly disclose M
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