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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Help with email please

Client email to hotel (Would you sat that this clients is an English native speaker"? Is it natural to say this?)
Dear Hotel,
I herewith confirm my room booking as discussed by phone earlier
Kindly confirm back this booking.
Regards,

xxxx

Hotel email to client (Is it natural to say : Further to your request ... as follows/follow"?

Dear Sir,
Further to your request we would like to confirm your booking as follows : Twin room from 10.26 to 10.29 for 2 people at a rate of 145 dollars a night.

Thank you
  

Top answer

Here is natural English. I booked a room by phone today as follows. 2 people, twin beds, arrive 26 Oct, depart 29 Oct.

— Clive

  • Here is natural English.
  • I booked a room by phone today as follows.
  • 2 people, twin beds, arrive 26 Oct, depart 29 Oct.
  • $145 a night.
  • Please confirm.
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Here is natural English.

I booked a room by phone today as follows.
2 people, twin beds, arrive 26 Oct, depart 29 Oct. $145 a night.
Please confirm.

Thanks,
Tom Smith

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Confirmed. Thank you for choosing to stay with us.
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