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Hi Could you please help with this email. Is it ok or need some editing, if yes could you please tell me where? Thanks for the help. ==
Hi
For you who want to read for next class, I am going to cover the following subjects

1) Inheritance
2) Override methods
3) Interface
4) Java Packages
5) Applets
6) Event Handling (if time permit)To read about these subjects I recome this link
http://www.justexample.com
Regards
Me

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I'd change it to:
Hi,
Re: Programming Module ABC123
These are the subjects for the next class:
1) Inheritance
2) Override methods
3) Interface
4) Java Packages
5) Applets
6) Event Handling (if time permits)

For more information on these topics, please view http://www.justexample.com

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[nq:1]Hi Could you please help with this email. Is it ok or need some editing, if yes could you please ... following subjects 1) Inheritance 2) Override methods 3) Interface 4) Java Packages 5) Applets 6) Event Handling (if time permit)[/nq]
I don't think John Lawler would allow you to use that "permit", arch-descriptivist though he be.

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[nq:1]I'd change it to: Hi, Re: Programming Module ABC123 These are the subjects for the next class: 1) Inheritance 2) Override methods 3) Interface 4) Java Packages 5) Applets 6) Event Handling (if time permits) For more information on these topics, please view http://www.justexample.com[/nq]
or, should time permit

john

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[nq:1]Hi Could you please help with this email. Is it ok or need some editing, if yes could you please ... 5) Applets 6) Event Handling (if time permit) To read about these subjects I recome this link http://www.justexample.com Regards Me[/nq]
Dear leza,
No matter how many times you post your selfish demands for assistance, you pay no heed to any recommendation that requires you to expend effort in solving your own problems. The suggestion that you use a dictionary has never been accepted by you. Were you to spend a little money to purchase a decent dictionary and were you to spend a little more effort in using that dictionary, you could answer many of your own questions. You show utter disregard for the help that has been given you when you manufacture words like "recome."
You would do everyone here a favor if you rid yourself of the notion that Internet is a substitute for a course in remedial English. You will get much further in learning English by enrolling in any of the English courses offered in your local junior college. Feel free to disregard this advice as you have done so often in the past.
wrmst rgrds,
Murray

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R F (Email Removed) write:
[nq:1]On Sun, 5 Oct 2003, leza write:[/nq]
[nq:2]Hi Could you please help with this email. Is it ... Java Packages 5) Applets 6) Event Handling (if time permit)[/nq]
[nq:1]I don't think John Lawler would allow you to use that "permit", arch-descriptivist though he be.[/nq]
Ooh, a new epithet.
Thanks, that'll look good on my resume.
Anyway, Nihil Obstat.
It's not my job to "allow" anybody,
let alone issue "permits".
The fixed phrase *is* "if time permits"
and the uninflected "permit" at the end of
(6) will likely be noted, if at all, as a toyp.
But one could certainly get away with
using an infinitive form there instead
of a finite one, since it is in the scope
of "if". It sounds old-fashioned, of
course, but I think that's kind of charming
in the context of Applets and Event Handling.
If this be Arch-Descriptivism,
make the most of it.
://www.umich.edu/~jlawler U Michigan Linguistics Dept "A man does not know what he is saying until he knows what he is not saying." G.K. Chesterton, 1936, "As I Was Saying"

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[nq:2]Hi Could you please help with this email. Is it ... about these subjects I recome this link http://www.justexample.com Regards Me[/nq]
[nq:1]Dear leza, No matter how many times you post your selfish demands for assistance, you pay no heed to any ... junior college. Feel free to disregard this advice as you have done so often in the past. wrmst rgrds, Murray[/nq]
Leza's English is understandable. Her errors are minor. What she really wants is proof reading. Perhaps she is even taking a course. I , personally , don't see anything wrong with that.
tommy

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[nq:1]if[/nq]
[nq:2]Dear leza, No matter how many times you post your ... have done so often in the past. wrmst rgrds, Murray[/nq]
[nq:1]Leza's English is understandable. Her errors are minor. What she really wants is proof reading. Perhaps she is even taking a course. I , personally , don't see anything wrong with that.[/nq]
leza, only appears in AUE to take advantage of the generosity of the participants. leza's attitude has always been gimme-gimme. She has no interest in contributing, not even a dim sum recipe. She shows up when she needs a quick answer to a question she could easily find for herself with a little effort. Lazy leza's English would benefit more by introducing herself to her neighbors and learn how to behave in a social setting.

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[nq:1]leza, only appears in AUE to take advantage of the generosity of the participants. leza's attitude has always been gimme-gimme. ... leza's English would benefit more by introducing herself to her neighbors and learn how to behave in a social setting.[/nq]
The whole point of this newsgroup is to help. If you don't want to help on a particular thread, then ignore it (as I do many).
I will answer her queries again (or otherwise), as I only read the request for help - not the person requesting.
If we all had this attitide, the world could be a better place.

Kev

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How nice reply is this Kevin.. True if we have more people like you then the world would be much much better..
Thanks for the help Kevin..

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Thanks "tommy" for your nice reply. I appreciate it. Yake good care. *** bless you.

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