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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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help with cv
Please could someone have a look at my cv. Since I'm applying in Europe I would prefer british english suggestions.
Thank you very much for your help!
Jacqueline Lutz Phone: +41 78 792 01 06
Studackerstr. 19 E-mail: Email Removed
8038 Zürich
Curriculum Vitae
Education
10.2002 -11.2004 Zurich University of Applied Sciences - Winterthur
Field of Study: Business administration
Major in the 6. semester: Customer Relationship Management (CRM)
International class
03.2004 – 07.2004 Ecole Supérieur du Commerce Extérieur - Paris
Erasmus exchange student
10.2001-03.2002 Swiss Federal Institute of Technology ETH - Zurich
Biochemistry - 1 Semester
08.1996-02.2001 Kantonsschule Stadelhofen - Zurich
High School Graduation (''Matura”) - Type L
1988-1996 Primary and Middle- School - Amriswil
Professional Experience 17.3.2005-15.7.2005 ZHW Winterthur
Part time support of the implementation the new customer data base (cobra) and data administration
15.7.2002-11.10.2002 EvoBus Kloten
Placement
Marketing and Controlling
2.4.2002-15.7.2002 Credit Suisse Horgen
Part time Call Centre Agent - Online banking
7.5.2001-27.7.2001 Restaurant Han Zurich
Waitress
1.9.2001-11.2004 Avec Shop Oberrieden
Part time accounting Assistant
Language Skills German - Mother tongue
English - Good knowledge, written & spoken
French - Good knowledge, written & spoken
Spanish - Basic knowledge
Computer Skills Ms Office, Access, PowerPoint
Personal
Date of birth 15 march 1981
Hometown Zurich, ZH
Civil status unmarried
Hobbies Travelling, reading, culture, music, diving
References
References will be supplied upon request
Thank you very much for your help!
Jacqueline Lutz Phone: +41 78 792 01 06
Studackerstr. 19 E-mail: Email Removed
8038 Zürich
Curriculum Vitae
Education
10.2002 -11.2004 Zurich University of Applied Sciences - Winterthur
Field of Study: Business administration
Major in the 6. semester: Customer Relationship Management (CRM)
International class
03.2004 – 07.2004 Ecole Supérieur du Commerce Extérieur - Paris
Erasmus exchange student
10.2001-03.2002 Swiss Federal Institute of Technology ETH - Zurich
Biochemistry - 1 Semester
08.1996-02.2001 Kantonsschule Stadelhofen - Zurich
High School Graduation (''Matura”) - Type L
1988-1996 Primary and Middle- School - Amriswil
Professional Experience 17.3.2005-15.7.2005 ZHW Winterthur
Part time support of the implementation the new customer data base (cobra) and data administration
15.7.2002-11.10.2002 EvoBus Kloten
Placement
Marketing and Controlling
2.4.2002-15.7.2002 Credit Suisse Horgen
Part time Call Centre Agent - Online banking
7.5.2001-27.7.2001 Restaurant Han Zurich
Waitress
1.9.2001-11.2004 Avec Shop Oberrieden
Part time accounting Assistant
Language Skills German - Mother tongue
English - Good knowledge, written & spoken
French - Good knowledge, written & spoken
Spanish - Basic knowledge
Computer Skills Ms Office, Access, PowerPoint
Personal
Date of birth 15 march 1981
Hometown Zurich, ZH
Civil status unmarried
Hobbies Travelling, reading, culture, music, diving
References
References will be supplied upon request
Top answer
As an outline it is ok but does not give much impression of you as a person or any details about your work experience and what skills you bring. Expand the work experience to include proper Job titles for all positions and write a little about your duties and responsibilities. e.
- As an outline it is ok but does not give much impression of you as a person or any details about your work experience and what skills you bring.
- Expand the work experience to include proper Job titles for all positions and write a little about your duties and responsibilities.
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- able to work well in a team, etc etc).
- At the moment there is nothing to make you stand out from other candidates; your CV is more than just a list of information, it needs to sell you).
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As an outline it is ok but does not give much impression of you as a person or any details about your work experience and what skills you bring. Expand the work experience to include proper Job titles for all positions and write a little about your duties and responsibilities. You could also include a section on the perssonal skills you will be bringing (i.e. able to work well in a team, etc et
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