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Ankdres Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Help with Cover Letter Letter pls
0 Can anyone help me please with this letter? Grammar and concordance for example? 02 br
00 Motivation Letter: 02 br
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00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement and a career progression on the financial industry. Regarding the excellent reputation of Hampton College in specific, the Department of Economics, and its international recognized researches, I have chosen Hampton to study. Furthermore, I also plan to do the Master in Finance at Hampton, after finishing the graduate finance program. 02 br
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00 I have a work experience in La Caja, one of the biggest spanishes bank in assets, working in an external commission auditing loans contracts and reporting directly for the Spanish Central Bank and the National Treasury. After that, I have finished my degree and I came to London to improve my English skills when I have started to work in a International Company of Funds’ Transfers, liasing with more than 240 banks around the world, processing and confirming multi FX settlements, treasury, daily reconcialitions and cheque risk administrations. Starting as sales executive and finishing as a manager in the central branch of the company. 02 br
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00 Aside my working experience, I also have knowledge in stock market, being a 01 span 00 keen awareness of world events, current affair and financial markets. My interest in those subjects have started after I made a course, during my degree, in financial markets and technical chart analysis, and I have started to invest on the Madrid Stock Exchange using an online stockbroker platform. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 I have studied the elementary and high school in a top school in Madrid, Montfort School, which allowed me to enter in a top 5 university in Madrid, Universidad Complutense de Madrid. Where I have studied Business Administration, what the equivalent in UK would be a Bachelor Hons Degree in Science in Business Administration. Which includes, statistics, finance, accounting, marketing, economics, administration, human resource and strategy planning. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Thus, I am very motivated in improve my mathematical skills and my technical knowledge in finance with Hampton College. 02 span 02 br
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00 Your sincerely, 02 br
00 Anderson 00 . 00 0-
00 Motivation Letter: 02 br
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00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement and a career progression on the financial industry. Regarding the excellent reputation of Hampton College in specific, the Department of Economics, and its international recognized researches, I have chosen Hampton to study. Furthermore, I also plan to do the Master in Finance at Hampton, after finishing the graduate finance program. 02 br
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00 I have a work experience in La Caja, one of the biggest spanishes bank in assets, working in an external commission auditing loans contracts and reporting directly for the Spanish Central Bank and the National Treasury. After that, I have finished my degree and I came to London to improve my English skills when I have started to work in a International Company of Funds’ Transfers, liasing with more than 240 banks around the world, processing and confirming multi FX settlements, treasury, daily reconcialitions and cheque risk administrations. Starting as sales executive and finishing as a manager in the central branch of the company. 02 br
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00 Aside my working experience, I also have knowledge in stock market, being a 01 span 00 keen awareness of world events, current affair and financial markets. My interest in those subjects have started after I made a course, during my degree, in financial markets and technical chart analysis, and I have started to invest on the Madrid Stock Exchange using an online stockbroker platform. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 I have studied the elementary and high school in a top school in Madrid, Montfort School, which allowed me to enter in a top 5 university in Madrid, Universidad Complutense de Madrid. Where I have studied Business Administration, what the equivalent in UK would be a Bachelor Hons Degree in Science in Business Administration. Which includes, statistics, finance, accounting, marketing, economics, administration, human resource and strategy planning. 02 span 02 br
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01 span 00 Thus, I am very motivated in improve my mathematical skills and my technical knowledge in finance with Hampton College. 02 span 02 br
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00 Your sincerely, 02 br
00 Anderson 00 . 00 0-
Top answer
02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Motivation Letter: 02 br 00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College 01 u 00 is according 02 u 00 my target to develop my skills 01 u 00 on 02 u 00 the financial field for 01 u 00 a knowledge improvement 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 a career progression on 02 u 00 the financial industry. 01 u 00 Regarding 02 u 00 the excellent reputation of Hampton College 01 u 00 in specific 02 u 00 , the Department of Economics, and its international recognized 01 u 00 researches 02 u 00 , I have chosen Hampton 01 u 00 to study 02 u 00 .
- 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas.
- One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Motivation Letter: 02 br 00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College 01 u 00 is according 02 u 00 my target to develop my skills 01 u 00 on 02 u 00 the financial field for 01 u 00 a knowledge improvement 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 a career progression on 02 u 00 the financial industry.
- 01 u 00 Regarding 02 u 00 the excellent reputation of Hampton College 01 u 00 in specific 02 u 00 , the Department of Economics, and its international recognized 01 u 00 researches 02 u 00 , I have chosen Hampton 01 u 00 to study 02 u 00 .
- Furthermore, I also plan to do the Master in Finance at Hampton, after finishing the graduate finance program.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I have 01 u 00 a work 02 u 00 experience in La Caja, one of the biggest 01 u 00 spanishes bank 02 u 00 in assets, working 01 u 00 in 02 u 00 an external commission auditing 01 u 00 loans 02 u 00 contracts and reporting directly 01 u 00 for 02 u 00 the Spanish Central Bank and the National Treasury.
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01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: 02 i 02 br
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00 Motivation Letter: 02 br
00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College 01 u 00 is according 02 u 00 my target to develop my skills 01 u 00 on 02 u
01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: 02 i 02 br
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00 Motivation Letter: 02 br
00 The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College 01 u 00 is according 02 u 00 my target to develop my skills 01 u 00 on 02 u
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0 Thank you very much Micawber!!!! You helped me a lot... 02 br
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