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0i'm writing this paper and i did all the checking myself and i can't seem to find any more errors that i need to correct. 02br
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00Scrubs the television show that deals with real life situations. Even though it may be a comedy it does have the human elements that we all go through everyday of our lives. The characters experiences real emotional situation and the stages they have to go through to resolve that problem. Some handle it differently than others, but they all have problems that they have to face up to. It’s very similar in our life where at moments we just want to be left alone and while moments we want to be with someone. Life is filled with problems and we have to face them eventually. Each episode the character face new dilemmas and struggle to overcome that problem. It might be relationships, depressions, drugs, or anything else that human experiences. The interesting part of it all is that some of the problems may have been resolved in that particular episode, but it turns out that it was never really resolved. Just like situations in our lives when we think we had found the answer to the problem but it turns out that problem was never answered properly or we tried to divert it. After going through an experience in our life it makes us stronger and we have a new appreciation on life. No matter what we do or plan to do we have to consider the people around us. Sure we can end everything in an insistence, but the people who are alive are the one that will suffer the pain. They have to keep living and reminded of the person they have lost. That’s the beauty of the show; it is able to address that kind of pain while adding humors to the situation. The show portrays how the characters cope with that problem and eventually move on. Nine out of ten times when something happens in our lives we tend to overreact or under react and that makes the situation even worst. Humans are affected by everything in their daily lives even to the smallest detail. Unlike animals in we are able to adapt to our environment and change with each situations. As the show progresses we can see little by little how the characters develop and adapt to their new lives. Much similar to our life, we change with each event we go through. Sure the place that we visit and the place we work at may be the same but our perspectives has changed. Life is filled with mystery, suspense, and pain. It’s up to us to take full advantage of it and live our life to the fullest. Down that journal it may seems tiring and difficult at times but we have to keep on moving. There’s always a new light down that path and it’s our choice if want to search for it. Once we find it, it’ worth all the difficulties we had endure.0-
  

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0You need to break your essay down into paragraphs.02br
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0i made a few changes, how does it sound now?02br
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00Scrubs the television show that deals with real life situations that we can all relate to. Even though it may be a comedy, it does have the human elements that we all go through every day of our lives. The characters experiences real emotional situation and the stages they have to go through to resolve that problem. Som

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