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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Help with comma placing
this sentence below sounds right when i read it, but are the commas used correctly? if not, a proper restructuring of the sentence would be very much appreciated. thanks.
"we find art to be a mere upgraded reflection of our own thoughts, which lie trapped, in all their majestic beauty, within the prison cell of our minds."
"we find art to be a mere upgraded reflection of our own thoughts, which lie trapped, in all their majestic beauty, within the prison cell of our minds."
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Hi, this sentence below sounds right when i read it, but are the commas used correctly? if not, a proper restructuring of the sentence would be very much appreciated. thanks.
- Hi, this sentence below sounds right when i read it, but are the commas used correctly?
- if not, a proper restructuring of the sentence would be very much appreciated.
- thanks.
- " Seems fine to me.
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Hi,
this sentence below sounds right when i read it, but are the commas used correctly? if not, a proper restructuring of the sentence would be very much appreciated. thanks.
"We find art to be a mere upgraded reflection of our own thoughts, which lie trapped, in all their majestic beauty, within the prison cell of our minds."
Seems fine
this sentence below sounds right when i read it, but are the commas used correctly? if not, a proper restructuring of the sentence would be very much appreciated. thanks.
"We find art to be a mere upgraded reflection of our own thoughts, which lie trapped, in all their majestic beauty, within the prison cell of our minds."
Seems fine
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