Yours is basically OK, John. I would do this: Dear Rental Manager, I operate John's Garden Care, and I would like to offer my services to your company for any of your managed properties requiring garden maintenance. The services I provide at competitive rates include planting native and non-native species, pruning, mowing, weeding, raking, watering, fertilizing, and other common yard and garden services.
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