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58333 Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Help with business introduction letter
Hi, could you please assist in writing a letter of introduction.
I am starting up a new garden care business and would like to approach real estate agents that look after rental properties.
Example of
Dear Rental Manager
My name is John from Johns Garden Care
I would like to offer my services to your company for consideration to assist in maintaining any properties that you manage, that require garden maintanence.
The services I am able to provide are
Shrub pruning, planting native and non-native species, Raking, watering, fertilising, weed removal Ect.
I thank you in advance for your consideration.
Regards John W
I am starting up a new garden care business and would like to approach real estate agents that look after rental properties.
Example of
Dear Rental Manager
My name is John from Johns Garden Care
I would like to offer my services to your company for consideration to assist in maintaining any properties that you manage, that require garden maintanence.
The services I am able to provide are
Shrub pruning, planting native and non-native species, Raking, watering, fertilising, weed removal Ect.
I thank you in advance for your consideration.
Regards John W
Top answer
Yours is basically OK, John. I would do this: Dear Rental Manager, I operate John's Garden Care, and I would like to offer my services to your company for any of your managed properties requiring garden maintenance. The services I provide at competitive rates include planting native and non-native species, pruning, mowing, weeding, raking, watering, fertilizing, and other common yard and garden services.
- Yours is basically OK, John.
- I would do this: Dear Rental Manager, I operate John's Garden Care, and I would like to offer my services to your company for any of your managed properties requiring garden maintenance.
- The services I provide at competitive rates include planting native and non-native species, pruning, mowing, weeding, raking, watering, fertilizing, and other common yard and garden services.
- Please contanct me at Email Removed or [phone number] .
- I am happy to answer any inquiries you may have.
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Yours is basically OK, John. I would do this:
Dear Rental Manager,
I operate John's Garden Care, and I would like to offer my services to your company for any of your managed properties requiring garden maintenance.
The services I provide at competitive rates include planting native and non-native species, pruning, mowing, weeding, raking,
Dear Rental Manager,
I operate John's Garden Care, and I would like to offer my services to your company for any of your managed properties requiring garden maintenance.
The services I provide at competitive rates include planting native and non-native species, pruning, mowing, weeding, raking,
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