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P3t3r1 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Help with another short paragraph
0 00 Hello, I am wondering if I could get another quick grammar editing with this short little paragraph. Thanks alot. 02 br
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00 People who are well fed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper education. The society in 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 is relatively crude. People live in mud huts, plant their own food, and receive a simple education compared to the West. 01 u 00 The Shinning Houses 02 u 00 evolves around a different part of the spectrum. 00 00 The inhabitants live in a section of the western society that does not “[make] their living by physical work (67)”. They are mostly white-collars that are not too terribly wealthy but fare better than most and have high expectations. Yet, people in this middle-class, westernized society are just as selfish as those that live in 00 . In 01 02 00 , busloads of relatives came to visit Pius, the elderly lottery winner, not because they want to “congratulate” him on his win but because they want to “[clamour] for his attention (98)” and see the “telegram that announced [his] win (99)”. Everyone is concerned about where the money is going and cares little about Pius. 00 0-
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00 People who are well fed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper education. The society in 01 u 00 The Winner 02 u 00 is relatively crude. People live in mud huts, plant their own food, and receive a simple education compared to the West. 01 u 00 The Shinning Houses 02 u 00 evolves around a different part of the spectrum. 00 00 The inhabitants live in a section of the western society that does not “[make] their living by physical work (67)”. They are mostly white-collars that are not too terribly wealthy but fare better than most and have high expectations. Yet, people in this middle-class, westernized society are just as selfish as those that live in 00 . In 01 02 00 , busloads of relatives came to visit Pius, the elderly lottery winner, not because they want to “congratulate” him on his win but because they want to “[clamour] for his attention (98)” and see the “telegram that announced [his] win (99)”. Everyone is concerned about where the money is going and cares little about Pius. 00 0-
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 P3t3r1 12 cite 10 Hello, I am wondering if I could get another quick grammar editing with this short little paragraph. Thanks alot. 12 br 12 br 10 People who are wel 11 font 10 l-f 12 font 10 ed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper education.
- 0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 P3t3r1 12 cite 10 Hello, I am wondering if I could get another quick grammar editing with this short little paragraph.
- Thanks alot.
- 12 br 12 br 10 People who are wel 11 font 10 l-f 12 font 10 ed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper education.
- The society in 11 u 10 The Winner 12 u 10 is relatively crude.
- People live in mud huts, plant their own food, and receive a simple education compared to the West.
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01 cite 10 P3t3r1 12 cite 10 Hello, I am wondering if I could get another quick grammar editing with this short little paragraph. Thanks alot. 12 br
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10 People who are wel 11 font 10 l-f 12 font 10 ed and educated are just as self-centered as those who suffer in poverty and lack proper
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