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Please tell me what is wrong with these and it would really help me if you rewrote them. Thank you.
The project we are proposing is based on an excellent idea developed in Australia during the 1990’s. The first person to realize that this was a good idea died some time ago. In the event we are funded, we hope to continue the project until it is no longer needed. The way we look at it is, “nothing ventured, nothing gained.” That is why we are proposing to conduct an advanced algebra workshop for high school Math teachers using hand-held puppets so they can use this art form to introduce math concepts to their students.

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Existing is being unique. Existence, reality, essence, cause, or truth is uniqueness. The geometric point in the center of the sphere is nature’s symbol of the immeasurable uniqueness within its measurable effect. A center is always unique; otherwise it would not be a center. Because uniqueness is reality, or that which makes a thing what it is, everything this is real is based on centralization.”