Help with a title.

Hi,

Could you check my translation of this title:

«Automaded workspace of a railway station's dispatcher»?

I'd prefer "dispatcher's workspace" but then I don't know where to put "automated".

Need suggections as to possible improvements.

Your title will be easier to understand if you use a verb form.

eg «Auto

Clive:

Thanks for this, but I'm afraid it may be perceived as a modification of an already exisiting workspace (may it not?). I am not sure it'll sound right, because it is the development of a new workspace (from scratch) that is in focus of the article.

But anyway, it's a nice alternative I didn't even think about!

Hi,

«Automaded workspace of a railway station's dispatcher»


Well, that just shows how unclear the meaning of your original title was.

Hello, Clive.

«Well, that just shows how unclear the meaning of your original title was.»

Really??

«Development of a new and automated workspace for a railway dispatcher»

Well, that's longer, but (!) sounds OK to me.

Thank you.

P.S.: And nevertheless I prefer my original version... Maybe it's due to my bad sence of English?

Hi,

I meant that, for example, it didn't say anything about 'new' or 'development'.

Clive

Yes, but according to "the politics of the party" one may not call their paper «Development of...», «Research/investigation of...» e.t.c for such titles imply a process, whilst the article treats of the result of developments, researches, investigations...

Not that I am on the "party's" side, but my scientific adviser is. And she tolerates no democracy in her department...

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