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I have a rough thesis statement that needs some work and I was wondering if someone could point out something that might need to be changed or worded differently thanks for the help!!

What were the differences between women and men's lives in Golden Age Athens?
Here are a few issues you should discuss and analyze, but you will think of others as well: what kind of training and or education did women and men receive? What roles seemed to be expected of women, and how were these different from men's roles? What do these sources tell us about relations between the sexes? What do you think accounts for the differences between men's and women's lives in Golden Age Athens?

There were numerous differences between men and women in Golden Age Greece that alienated them from one another.
  

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[nq:1]I have a rough thesis statement that needs some work and I was wondering if someone could point out something ... Age Athens? [/nq] How about something like this: Whether having to do with education, role in society or relations between the sexes, men and women living in Golden Age Greece were quite diverse.

  • [nq:1]I have a rough thesis statement that needs some work and I was wondering if someone could point out something ...
  • Age Athens?
  • [/nq] How about something like this: Whether having to do with education, role in society or relations between the sexes, men and women living in Golden Age Greece were quite diverse.
  • I'm not quite sure if that is the kind of thesis statement you are looking for but I thought I'd give it a shot.
  • feel free to ask.
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[nq:1]I have a rough thesis statement that needs some work and I was wondering if someone could point out something ... Age Athens? There were numerous differences between men and women in Golden Age Greece that alienated them from one another.[/nq]
How about something like this: Whether having to do with education, role in society or relations between the sexes, men and women living in Golden

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