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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help with a short paragraph

Can somebody please comments the English?

Regards,

Fizzi

In addition to that, the variability of quality of information was observed across studies, particularly with studies conducted in developed and developing countries. It suggested the need for future research to focus on the comparative regulatory in order to overcome serious weaknesses in the existing regulation.
  

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Hi, In addition to that, the variability of the quality of information ( or of information quality)was observed across studies, particularly with those conducted in developed and developing countries. It suggested the need for future research to focus on the comparative regulatory in order to overcome serious weaknesses in the existing regulation. I don't know what you mean by 'regulatory', but I doubt that it's the correct word to use.

  • Hi, In addition to that, the variability of the quality of information ( or of information quality)was observed across studies, particularly with those conducted in developed and developing countries.
  • It suggested the need for future research to focus on the comparative regulatory in order to overcome serious weaknesses in the existing regulation.
  • I don't know what you mean by 'regulatory', but I doubt that it's the correct word to use.
  • Clive
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Hi,
In addition to that, the variability of the quality of information (or of information quality)was observed across studies, particularly with those conducted in developed and developing countries. It suggested the need for future research to focus on the comparative regulatory in order to overcome serious weaknesses in the existing regulation.

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Thanks Clive.
Fizzi

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