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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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We appointed ABC forwarder to collect 720 pcs H789. Please advise the goods available date for our arrangement.
  

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If you're trying to say what I think you want to say then maybe this sounds better.... Though I'm not sure if forwarder is a title or you are trying to use it as someone that forwards... We have appointed an ABC forwarder to collect 720 pcs H789s.

  • If you're trying to say what I think you want to say then maybe this sounds better....
  • Though I'm not sure if forwarder is a title or you are trying to use it as someone that forwards...
  • We have appointed an ABC forwarder to collect 720 pcs H789s.
  • Please advise us on a date for when the goods will be available for our arrangement.
  • or maybe this is better...
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If you're trying to say what I think you want to say then maybe this sounds better....
Though I'm not sure if forwarder is a title or you are trying to use it as someone that forwards...

We have appointed an ABC forwarder to collect 720 pcs H789s. Please advise us on a date for when the goods will be available for our arrangement.

or maybe this is better...

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