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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
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Any suggestions on how to alter this sentence so the "his brothers' bodies" refers to Palin, who is the young mage.
Steel Brightblade, a Dark Knight and Palin’s cousin, then took the young mage and his brothers’ bodies back to Solace, where they could be properly buried and where Palin could explain the conditions of his release to his family.
Steel Brightblade, a Dark Knight and Palin’s cousin, then took the young mage and his brothers’ bodies back to Solace, where they could be properly buried and where Palin could explain the conditions of his release to his family.
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In terms of grammar, it refers to the young mage. In terms of context, he reader needs to know that Palin had brothers. and that they are mow dead.
- In terms of grammar, it refers to the young mage.
- In terms of context, he reader needs to know that Palin had brothers.
- and that they are mow dead.
- I assume that any reader who has follower your writing this far will be clear about this!
- Clive
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In terms of grammar, it refers to the young mage. In terms of context, he reader needs to know that Palin had brothers. and that they are mow dead.
I assume that any reader who has follower your writing this far will be clear about this!
Clive
I assume that any reader who has follower your writing this far will be clear about this!
Clive
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