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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
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Help with a sentence

Can somebody please comment the English?
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Fizzi

Therefore, proactive monitoring mechanisms of all health news before they are published in newspapers would appear necessary to prevent the dissemination of incomplete information to the public.
  

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Hi, Therefore, proactive monitoring mechanisms for all health news before it is published in newspapers would appear necessary to prevent the dissemination of incomplete information to the public. Fizzi, it's not wrong, but it reads like it was written by a government committee whose job is to write dull and very, very cautious English. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Therefore, proactive monitoring mechanisms for all health news before it is published in newspapers would appear necessary to prevent the dissemination of incomplete information to the public.
  • Fizzi, it's not wrong, but it reads like it was written by a government committee whose job is to write dull and very, very cautious English.
  • Clive
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Hi,
Therefore, proactive monitoring mechanisms for all health news before it is published in newspapers would appear necessary to prevent the dissemination of incomplete information to the public.

Fizzi, it's not wrong, but it reads like it was written by a government committee whose job is to write dull and very, very cautious English.
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Thanks Clive ,

Regards,
Fizzi
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