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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Help with a sentence
Hi all,
Can somebody please comments the English?
The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, and the condition was poorer in developing countries.
Regards,
Fizzi
Can somebody please comments the English?
The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, and the condition was poorer in developing countries.
Regards,
Fizzi
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The sentence is fine the way it is. If you want it to sound more professional, I would write : The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, however, the condition was poorer in the developing countries. Hope this helps.
- The sentence is fine the way it is.
- If you want it to sound more professional, I would write : The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, however, the condition was poorer in the developing countries.
- Hope this helps.
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The sentence is fine the way it is.
If you want it to sound more professional, I would write : The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, however, the condition was poorer in the developing countries.
Hope this helps.
If you want it to sound more professional, I would write : The studies noted that the X was a problem both in developed and developing countries, however, the condition was poorer in the developing countries.
Hope this helps.
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And that has a punctuation problem and a distributional problem. I suspect also that 'conditions' is meant, since problem and condition are not synonymous (if I am mistaken, the 'poorer' is a wrong word choice):
The studies noted that the X was a problem in both developed and developing countries; however, the conditions were poo
And that has a punctuation problem and a distributional problem. I suspect also that 'conditions' is meant, since problem and condition are not synonymous (if I am mistaken, the 'poorer' is a wrong word choice):
The studies noted that the X was a problem in both developed and developing countries; however, the conditions were poo
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