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Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help with a sentence

Can somebody please give some comments on the English?

Regards,

Fizzi

Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be sensible in controlling the promotional activities.
  

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Hi Fizzi, Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be sensible in controlling the promotional activities. Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be a sensible method of controlling the promotional activities. Best wishes, Clive

  • Hi Fizzi, Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be sensible in controlling the promotional activities.
  • Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be a sensible method of controlling the promotional activities.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Fizzi,
Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be sensible in controlling the promotional activities.
Although the standards set for the promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that regulations may be a sensible method of controlling
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Hi Clive,

What about this?

1- Although standards set for promotional control are rarely achieved, we believe our results indicate that current regulations may do some good in controlling promotional activities.

Regards,

Fizzi
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Hi,
It's OK.
But do some good is a bit informal and weak. How about be of some value?

Clive
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That looks better. Thanks Clive

Fizzi

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