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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Help with a poem please.
Hi all, firstly a bit of background, I'm 25yeat old that hasn't wrote poetry since being forced to in english and I wasn't very good at it then.
I am proposing this weekend, and as a little something extra i'm giving my best efforts to write a little poem to help make the day more memorable for her.
please also stay on topic none of the normal dont do it banter ect.
so here goes.
I have never wrote a poem about anyone before,
Never their seemed a better time to start
It is you that I take the time more and more
for everything is coming from the heart
Never is there any doubt about why I love you,
It comes form the simple warmth of time together
I think it must be because our love is true,
even if the coldest weather
The glow I feel inside when i'm by your side
the laughter the joy your smile lasts till next time
forever giving me this feeling inside
see your even making me rhyme
Having a pass from the rest
your words the result from the last test
I am proposing this weekend, and as a little something extra i'm giving my best efforts to write a little poem to help make the day more memorable for her.
please also stay on topic none of the normal dont do it banter ect.
so here goes.
I have never wrote a poem about anyone before,
Never their seemed a better time to start
It is you that I take the time more and more
for everything is coming from the heart
Never is there any doubt about why I love you,
It comes form the simple warmth of time together
I think it must be because our love is true,
even if the coldest weather
The glow I feel inside when i'm by your side
the laughter the joy your smile lasts till next time
forever giving me this feeling inside
see your even making me rhyme
Having a pass from the rest
your words the result from the last test
Top answer
Okay, let me give you poem-writing advice. First, a poem is more than rhymes. It is also a tune, a beat.
- Okay, let me give you poem-writing advice.
- First, a poem is more than rhymes.
- It is also a tune, a beat.
- So the first thing I would do is make the lines the same number of syllables (even if they don't all have the same meter).
- Right now, the opening stanza has this count: 15, 10, 11, 10.
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Okay, let me give you poem-writing advice. First, a poem is more than rhymes. It is also a tune, a beat. So the first thing I would do is make the lines the same number of syllables (even if they don't all have the same meter). Right now, the opening stanza has this count: 15, 10, 11, 10. It doesn't flow. So I would standardize the lines at 10. I will try to keep to your words and thoug
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