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Ksengage Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Help with a part of a letter

Hi, this is a part of a letter I'm writing, that needs some proof-reading. I'm not sure if the grammar is correct. Hopefully this is the right forum to post this in!
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I would have the ability and experience with equipment to produce accurate images that would help with determining appropriate courses of treatment for the patient. I have visited a hospital-based department of ***, and I am confident that I would enjoy working as a *** technologist.

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I would make a few subtle changes. I would have the ability and experience with equipment to produce accurate images that would help with determining appropriate courses of treatment for patients. I have visited a hospital based department of ***, and I am confident that I would enjoy working as a *** technologist.

— MountainHiker

  • I would make a few subtle changes.
  • I would have the ability and experience with equipment to produce accurate images that would help with determining appropriate courses of treatment for patients.
  • I have visited a hospital based department of ***, and I am confident that I would enjoy working as a *** technologist.
  • Good luck!
  • MountainHiker
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I would make a few subtle changes.

I would have the ability and experience with equipment to produce accurate images that would help with determining appropriate courses of treatment for patients. I have visited a hospital based department of ***, and I am confident that I would enjoy working as a *** technologist.


Good luck!


MountainHiker
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