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Hly2004 Posted 20 years ago
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0Magpie can be found everywhere around the world, except in Mid-America,South-America, and Antarctica. They inhabit across our country,other than in deserts and prairies and especailly seen in coastal areas. With 4 species in total, they are unafraid of human beings by nature, and always show up in human's inhabited areas. Due to its smartness as most birds, it is selected as the bird of XXX province.02br
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00Here's a paragraph I wrote, I wonder if there is any word or sentence sound odd?02br
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00Could you please give your suggestions? 02br
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0Magpie01font 00s02font 00 can be found everywhere around the world, except in 01font 00Central02font 00 America, South America, and Antarctica. They inhabit 01font 00most of02font 00 our country, other than 01font 00the02font 00 deserts and prairies and 01font 00are02font 00 especailly seen in coastal areas. 0-

  • 0Magpie01font 00s02font 00 can be found everywhere around the world, except in 01font 00Central02font 00 America, South America, and Antarctica.
  • They inhabit 01font 00most of02font 00 our country, other than 01font 00the02font 00 deserts and prairies and 01font 00are02font 00 especailly seen in coastal areas.
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0Magpie01font00s02font00 can be found everywhere around the world, except in 01font00Central02font00 America, South America, and Antarctica. They inhabit 01font00most of02font00 our country, other than 01font00the02font0
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0What Nona said, except with these additions:02br
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00I don't think the four species relates to their lack of fear of humans, but it's set up that way. You can make them seperate sentences. Or you can include that bit of information elsewhere in the paragraph, such as by saying "The four species inhabit most of our country..."02br
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0 With 4 species in total, they are unafraid of human beings by nature,02br
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00a bit odd.'with' does not have anything to do with their nature.02br
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00'there are totally four species of the bird and all of them have no fear of man by nature.'0-
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0Thank you all!02br
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00Magpies can be found everywhere around the world, except in Central America, South America, and Antarctica. They inhabit most of our country, other than the deserts and prairies, and are especailly seen in coastal areas. There are 4 species in total. They are unafraid of human beings by nature, and always show up in areas inhabited by people. Due

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