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Debarghya Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Help with a letter

I'm writing a letter about replacement of battery. Please correct my mistakes

I am writing this letter to you to accept my claim regarding Replacement of my battery. I bought 12v battery from your store on 18th, January 2015, but recently/ on august 2015 my battery fall damaged. So, I took it to your store for replacement but they resist to accept replacement claim due to losing of my purchase invoice. So, it would be very helpful if you accept my replacement on basis of my warranty card and xeorx copy of purchase invoice.
  

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Do you mean that you've lost the original purchase invoice, but you still have a photocopy of it? "

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Do you mean that you've lost the original purchase invoice, but you still have a photocopy of it?
What do you mean by "battery fall damaged?"
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Yes I've the photocopy. My original copy is lost. And by "fall damaged" I want simply mean that it was working but just a few week ago it got broken.
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Anonymous it got broken.
Do you mean that you dropped it?
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No. It just stop working due to overcharge.
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I am writing this letter to to request that you to accept my claim regarding replacement of my the 12v battery I bought 12v battery from your store on the 18th of January, 2015. but recently/ on august 2015 my battery fall damaged. Unfortunately, the battery stopped working in August,
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Thanks for your answer.Please help me with another thing.1. My battery got damaged on August'15.(can i use this sentence to refer that it was damaged in past)2. My battery get Damaged in August'15.(can i use this sentence to refer that it damaged recently, a few days ago.) I'm asking this for spoken purpose.
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No, both of your suggested sentences don't work.
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